Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for reading my explanation.
My name is ×××. I’m a sophomore in Department Art and Media of ×× University of Engineering Science.
I was rejected just a few days ago with the reason:?“les informations communiqueés pour justifier l’objet et les conditions du séjour envisagé?ne sont pas fiables”. I feel sorry for not replying adequate information last time. This time I would like to provide you the purpose of my France trip and its preparation.
I enjoy travelling, which can broaden my mind and outlook. I have already been to many places in China. Since I’m a college student, I am more interested in outbound tourism. Fortunately, my parents also support me and are willing to help me realize my dream. So last May I went to Canada with their financial support and came back on time. This time they’ll cover all my expenses during my trip in France.
The reasons I want to go to France are as follows.
First, France is a very charming country. Especially Paris, the capital of France, is the center of culture and arts. There are many history relics, cultural attractions and art palaces, such as Musée du louvre, Cathédrale Notre-Dame de Paris, Chateau De Versailles and Arc de Triompheand La Tour Eiffel etc. When I was a child, I often dreamed of seeing these scenic spots with my own eyes.
Second, it is important to introduce my former high school classmate, now my good friend –×× who has the same dream with me. He is now studying in Toronto Canada. So during our meeting in Canada, we had planned a trip to France. His French visa in Toronto Canada has been approved. I will show you some photos about my friend LU Yuan and his visa.
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Furthermore, my major in college is jewelry design, an important art class. So I want to visit the center of art and fashion—Paris. It will be helpful to broaden my horizons. And it will be helpful for my future professional planning.
My friend and I have made a detailed itinerary and a hotel reservation as the preparation of this trip in France. I will be with my friend in the journey.
Next, please let me introduce my family. There are three people in my family. My mother is an accountant and my father an architect. I’m the only son of them. I love my family and I really cherish my happy life in China. They support my travelling plan , meanwhile, they also care about my future. They hope me stay in China. In addition, it is important for me to get a college diploma, which has a special significance to a student in China. To get the diploma, I have to spend the next two years in China to complete my study. So I would not stay illegally in France.
Finally I solemnly promise that I will return to China on time to continue my study.
Thank you for your understanding. I am really looking forward to this trip. I hope
that you can trust me and approve my visa. And this is also a hope of another young people, my good friend, ××.
Yours Sincerely,
×××
Apr 3, 2015
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