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教师 学科 类型 学案主题 朱亚南 英语 学生姓名 年级 包焕煜 初三 上课日期 教材版本 2013-5-31 人教版 第（ 12 ）课时 共（ ）课时 授课时段 13:00-15:00 知识讲解（ √ ） 考题讲解（ √ ） 本人课时统计 新课讲解 教学内容 课时数量 （全程或具体时间） 第（ 12 ）课时 作文模板 掌握正确的写作技巧 教学目标 个性化学习问题解决 教学重点、应用文、提示作文的写作手法 难点 考点分析 初升高重点复习 学生活动 教师活动 1） 2） Check: homework 一、说明利弊型 1．说明事物现状 2．事物本身的优缺点（或一方面） 3．你对现状（或前景）的看法 模板： Nowadays many people prefer (A) ,but is it really necessary ? Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First -- (Ａ优点一). Besides –(Ａ优点二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of To make matters worse,-- (Ａ教学过程 the important disadvantages is that -- (Ａ缺点一)．缺点二)． Through the above analysis, I think I would like to -- (看法),because---(原因) 【例5】（2010哈尔滨） 练习是学习中的一个重要环节，通过英语练习，我们可以查缺补漏，拓展知识， 提高成绩，但是有人认为做大量的英语练习增加负担。浪费时间，使人疲劳……请你围绕九年级 学生是否应该做大量的英语练习这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________1 中小学1对1课外辅导专家 ________________ Should ninth grade students do lots of English exercise？ Nowadays ,many ninth grade students prefer doing lots of English exercise, but is it really necessary ? Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. To start with , they can find out their mistakes though exercise. In addition，exercise help increase their knowledge. Finally ,doing lots of exercise will definitely improve their scores. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. First, it makes student very tired. To make it worse , doing a lot of exercise is not only boring and tiring ,but also a waste of time. Through the above analysis, I believe I would like to do lots of exercise because it makes us learn English better 二、不同观点型 1．列举不同的观点 2．写出自己的想法 模板： It is well known that there are many differences between A and B . A’s features are as follows: to begin with, --(特点一),furthermore , -- (特点二). Finally，--(特点三) However , B is nothing like A, on one hand， ------(特点一). On the other hand, --(特点二). Besides，--(特点三) As far as I am concerned, I firmly support A 或 B , because I am sure that the more _______, the more ______ 【例】你和Eric的交流中了解到中美两国课堂的各种不同的特点，请你根据下表简要 的描述这些特点，并就此谈谈你的想法 中国课堂：不称呼老师名字；仔细听讲，做笔记 美国课堂：学生面对面就座；比较放松，可以喝饮料；自由谈论 你的想法：…… There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class ,let’s have a look in china____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class ,let’s have a look .in china. First of all, students call their teachers “Mr”or “Miss”. Second, in class they always listen to the teacher and take notes carefully .Finally, if students want to explain their ideas, they have to raise their hands . However, American class are nothing like Chinese class , on one hand ，the students 2

中小学1对1课外辅导专家 sit around the desks, face to face; on the other hand ,they can even drink coffee or juice during the classes. What’s more, they can speak freely in class. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the American class ,because the more freely we can speak in class ,the more progress we will make. 三、人物介绍型 包含题目所给的全部人物特征 模板 He is a --(国籍)，he is --(年龄)，he has a happy family with three people in it .he is ----(性格)，in his free time， he is fond of –(活动)， he is--(职业)，he is kind-hearted and always help others in his job. Many people love him because he is not only a good --(职业）but also a good friend. 【例】假设你是li ming请给你的美国必有Tom写一封Email，介绍你的英语老师Mr.Lee。 要点如下： 他40岁，有一个幸福的家庭 性格外向，与学生相处很好 他的课堂很有趣，课后帮我们学英语 不抽烟，非常喜欢运动，擅长下棋 写一至两点其他同学对他的看法 ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ Dear tom: How are you recently? I am writing to tell you something about my English teacher Mr Lee Mr. Lee is forty years old . he has a happy family with three people in it .he is very outgoing ,and he gets along well with us students .He doesn’t smoke. In his free time ,he is fond of sports ,and he is especially good at playing chess. He is a very experienced teacher and his class is always very fun.After the class he always help us with our English .many of my classmates love him ,they think he is not only a good teacher ,but also a good friend. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Ming 3

中小学1对1课外辅导专家 四、开放型作文 没有给出过多提示的作文 列出自己的提示 根据文章来写出相应的开头和结尾 中间运用连接词to start with, next, in addition, finally等来组织，结构要清晰 【例】难忘的初中生活就要结束了。假如你是韩梅，即将迎来全新的高中生活，为了尽快适应新的环境，你打算在英语俱乐部的QQ群里面留言，谈一谈自己在高中学习、生活和与人相处等方面可能遇到的问题，并向大家寻求帮助。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 提示： 1. 可能会落后，尤其是数学 2. 不善交流，交朋友会有问题 3．不能照顾自己，新学校饭吃不惯 Hi，everybody，how’s it going？I will become a senior high school student this September. I am very happy，but I am afraid that I will meet some difficulties in new school . to start with , maybe I can’t keep up with my classmates ,especially in maths. Besides I am not sure if I can make some friends with others because I am not good at communicating. Finally ,I don’t know how to take good care of myself. I might not get used to the food in the new school . I am so worried and I really need some help． 课堂练习 课堂讲义 课后作业 对应练习 本节课教学计划完成情况：照常完成□ 提前完成□ 延后完成□ ____________________________ 学生的接受程度： 5 4 3 2 1 ______________________________ 学生的课堂表现：很积极□ 比较积极□ 一般积极□ 不积极□ ___________________________ 学生上次作业完成情况： 优□ 良□ 中□ 差□ 存在问题 _____________________________ 学生成长记录 学管师（ 班主任）_______________________________________________________________ 备注 班主任审批 教学主任审批 签字时间 4