作文写作与范文
本单元的主要话题是假期，在写假期活动过程时，要叙述清楚，可以从时间、地点、天气、出行方式、具体活动内容等多个方面来叙述。时态要用一般过去时，通常以第一人称为主。
⑴ 那么首先要审题，确定时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称，开头要介绍活动的时间、地点。
如：Last Saturday, I/we/our class went to ……
⑴ 正文要说明时间顺序，叙述事情的发展。注意时间状语的使用。 ⑶ 结尾要表达对这次旅行的感受。
如：We/I/Our class felt a little…… but We/I/Our class……
1、范文一
你们班上周六去牡泰农场(the Mutai farm)进行了一次社会实践活动。请你根据下面的内容提示，以“Our Trip to the Mutai Farm”为主题写一篇作文，并说明此次活动的经历与感受。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，内容应包括所有内容提示，可适当发挥，不少于80字。
Weather(天气)： sunny Transportation(交通)： school bus Activities(活动): visit the farm；listen to a talk；pick strawberries Our Trip to the Mutai Farm
Last Saturday, our class went to the Mutai Farm. It was sunny and warm that day. We went there by school bus. We talked and sang happily along the way. At about 9:00 a.m. , we got there. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. And then they took us to visit the farm. It was so big and clean. An hour later, we listened to a talk in a big hall. From the talk we knew that eating fruit and vegetables is good for our health. After lunch, we picked some strawberries there. They tasted delicious. At 3:00 p. m., we had to leave there.
We felt a little tired but we enjoyed ourselves. We want to visit it again.
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我们去牡泰农场的旅行
上周六，我们班去了牡泰农场。那天，天气晴朗、暖和。我们乘校车去那里。一路上我们愉快地交谈和唱歌。上午9点左右，我们到了那里。农场工人热烈欢迎我们。然后他们带我们参观了农场。农场又大又干净。一个小时后，我们在一个大礼堂里听了一次演讲。从谈话中我们知道吃水果和蔬菜对我们的健康有好处。午饭后，我们在那里摘了一些草莓。它们尝起来很美味。下午三点，我们不得不离开那里。
我们觉得有点累，但我们玩得很开心。我们想再去看看。
2、范文二
假设你是李明，请你根据下面表格中的汉语提示，写一篇日记，描述你上周末参加的一次郊游活动，并简要谈谈感受。
活动地点 交通方式 活动时间 活动内容 距离你家约十公里的里湖 骑自行车 ⑴上午九点出发 ⑴十点到达 ⑴下午五点半返回 自定(至少三项活动) 写作要求：1. 内容应包括所有内容提示，可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，不少于80字。
Last weekend, I went to the Li Lake with my friends. It is about ten kilometers away from my home. We rode our bikes there at 9: 00 in the morning. One hour later, we got there. We went boating in the lake first, and then we went fishing by the lake. The fish in the lake are big and fresh. They were all our meals at noon. In the afternoon, We went swimming in a swimming pool beside the lake. We felt relaxed and comfortable in the water. At 5:30 p.m. , we returned together.
We all having a good time in Li Lake.
上周末，我和朋友们去了里湖。离我家大约十公里远。我们早上9点骑自行车去那儿。一小时后，我们到了那里。我们先去湖里划船，然后去湖边钓鱼。湖里的鱼又大又新鲜。他们都是我们中午的饭。下午，我们去湖边的游泳池游泳。我们在水里感到轻松舒适。下午5点半，我们一起回来了。
我们在里湖玩得很开心。
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3、范文三
旅游是让生活更加精彩的调味品。请你根据以下提示，以“An Enjoyable Trip”为题写一篇英语短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，并说明此次旅游的经历与感受。
提示：1. Where did you go?
2. Who did you go with? 3. What did you do there? 4. How did you feel about the trip?
要求：1. 短文须包括提示中的四个要点,可适当发挥
2. 条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整，80词左右。
An Enjoyable Trip
Last summer, I went to New York by train with my family. It was my first trip abroad.
I got up very early. because I was excited to go to New York. First, we visited the Central Park. It was so beautiful that everyone who visited the park liked it very much. After that, we went shopping in a supermarket. It was crowded, so we didn't buy anything. Then we went to the zoo to see animals. The animals in the zoo were lovely and interesting. We came back home at seven o' clock. We all had fun. We were tired, too. We went to bed very early.
What an enjoyable trip we had!
去年夏天，我和家人坐火车去了纽约。这是我第一次出国旅行。
我起得很早。因为去纽约我感到很兴奋。首先，我们参观了中央公园。它太美了，每个参观过公园的人都非常喜欢它。之后，我们去超市购物。那里很拥挤，所以我们什么也没买。然后我们去动物园看动物。动物园里的动物既可爱又有趣。我们七点钟回家。我们都玩得很开心。我们也累了。我们很早就上床睡觉了。
我们的旅行真愉快！
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4、范文四
假如你是Kate，正和朋友们在西安旅游。请给你的父母写一封电子邮件，告诉他们你在西安旅游的情况。
提示：1. What places did you visit there?
2. How were the weather and the people there? 3. How do you like the trip?
要求：1. 邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 词数不少于80词。
Dear Mom and Dad,
I am writing this e-mail to tell you about my trip in Xi'an.
Xi'an is very big. Every morning I go for a walk with Tom and John at Youyi Road. Yesterday we went to the Bell Tower and the Drum Tower. The weather was a little hot. This morning we went to the Terracotta Army and we had Rougamo for lunch. It was really delicious. People in Xi'an were very friendly. We decided to go to Tang Paradise and many other place in the next three days. I think we'll have a good time.
亲爱的爸爸妈妈，
我写这封电子邮件是想告诉你我在西安的旅行。
西安很大。每天早上我和汤姆和约翰在友谊路散步。昨天我们去了钟楼和鼓楼。天气有点热。今天早上我们去了兵马俑，午餐吃了肉夹馍。真的很好吃。西安人很友好。我们决定在接下来的三天里去大唐芙蓉园和其他许多地方。我想我们会玩得很开心。
爱你的， 凯特 Love, Kate
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5、范文五
假设今天是国庆节，天气晴朗，你和家人去太湖(Tai Lake)游玩。请根据下面表格提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，记录本次活动并简要表达你的感受。
时间 活动 感受 出发得比较早，早上划船，玩沙滩排球，游泳，享疲惫但很开心 用海鲜，做游戏，唱歌等 九点到达 Today is National Day. It was fine. I went to Tai Lake with my family.
We left early in the morning and got there at nine. There were many people. First, we went boating on the lake. It was fun. Then, I played beach volleyball with my father. He played better and tried his best to teach me. After that, we went swimming in the lake. felt like I was a fish. I was relaxed and enjoyed myself in it. We had lunch at 12:00. I had some different kinds of seafood. It was delicious. Finally, we played games and sang songs. At 5:00 p. m. , we went back home.
Although we were tired, we had a great time. I hope I can go there again. 今天是国庆节。天气很好。我和家人去了太湖。
我们一大早就走了，九点到了那里。这儿有很多人。首先，我们在湖上划船。这很有趣。然后，我和我父亲打沙滩排球。他打得比我好，并尽力教我。之后，我们去湖里游泳。我感觉我像条鱼。我很放松并玩得很开心。我们12点吃了午饭。我吃了一些不同种类的海鲜。很好吃。最后，我们玩游戏，唱歌。下午5点，我们回家了。
虽然我们很累，但我们玩得很开心。我希望我能再去那里。
6、单元佳作背诵
Last summer vacation, I went to Hangzhou with my parents. It took us two hours to get there by train. Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake. Soon after we arrived, we took a boat trip on the West Lake. In the evening, we took a walk around the lake. The night views were really wonderful. The next day, we visited Hangzhou Amusement Park. On the third day, we went to Lingyin Temple. I took quite a few photos there. On the last day, we went to Yan'an Street and did some shopping. I bought some gifts for my good friends. During our stay, we also tasted delicious food.
It was a really wonderful trip! I hope to go there again.
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去年暑假，我和父母去了杭州。我们坐火车花了两个小时到达那里。杭州以西湖而闻名。我们到达后不久，乘船游览了西湖。晚上，我们在湖边散步。夜景真是太美了。第二天，我们参观了杭州游乐园。第三天，我们去了灵隐寺。我在那里拍了不少照片。最后一天，我们去延安街买了些东西。我给我的好朋友买了些礼物。在我们逗留期间，我们还品尝了美味的食物。
这是一次非常棒的旅行！我希望能再去那里。
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