之一：记叙文
一、高分技巧
1.头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，即我们通常所说的五个“w（what，who，when，where，why）和一个\"H”（how）。然后要确定文章中所用的人称、时态、叙述顺序、叙述间的过渡等。
2.突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写那些非关键的次要情节。
3.用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。
4.观点鲜明，升华主题
基本上记叙文都带着作者的观点。一般在记叙文结尾时作者要对所述事件或人物进行评论或评价，而非简单地就事论事。一个好的结尾能够起到画龙点睛的作用，在总结全文的同时升华文章的主题。 二、写作模板
【参考提纲】
第一段：总结描述，交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点，主题句。 第二段：具体描述，具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果。 第三段：发表自己的观点，表明自己的感受。 【参考模板】
Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it. To me, it happened （时间和地点）, and I still remember the whole process vividly.
It was a sunny day. Then （事件）drew my attention. I saw （详细说明当时情况） and to my （表达感受的名词） （当事人）was (正
在进行的动作). It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would （自 已的感受）.
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Whenever I look back on what happened that day. I think （观点或态度）. I will cherish all these memories forever. 三、经典例题
经典例题1
(中考直题改编）在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣…照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。
要求：
（1）故事必须原创；
（2）80-120词开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点：
（1）描述你的照片（时间，地点，人物……）； （2）分享你的故事（起因，经过，结果……）； （3）谈谈你的感受（感动，怀念，影响……）
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the hoto,________________________________
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【高分范文】
A Photo in My Heart
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was playing basketball happily with my dad. At that time, I was 10 while my dad looked younger.
When it comes to basketball, this is my favorite sport and I once wanted to be a basketball player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. However, playing basketball is not an easy thing as a girl. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me.
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The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
From then on, I always think of that sentence when I want to give up. Now, I spend less time playing basketball because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!
【高分词汇】 favorite adj.最喜欢的 train v.训练 n.火车 proud adj.自豪的 【高分短语】 at that time在那时 when it comes to当提到…. give up放弃
from then on从那时起 be proud of以…自豪 【高分句子】
（1）My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me.父亲什么也没说，静静地和我坐在一起 （2）But I will never forget what my father told me.但是我将永远不会忘记父亲告诉我的话。 经典例题2
（中考真题改编）假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的经感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。
（1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶； （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他看上去又冷又饿； （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给他； （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开； (5)你很感动……
参考词汇：乞丐 beggar，感动 be moved (1)词数：80-100个；
(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3)要点齐全,行文连贯，可适当发挥。
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On a cold morning，while I was_________________________________________________
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【高分范文】
A Moving Story
On a cold morning, while I was buying breakfast. I saw a girl in front of me buy some bread and milk .When the girl was about to leave, she found there was a poor old beggar under the tree. He looked so cold and hungry that he could not move. To my surprise, the girl went close to the beggar and offered her food to him. The beggar was grateful and thanked her again and again. The girl went away with a beautiful smile on her face.
At that moment. I was moved by the kind girl. I felt the touch of something bright and friendly. We should learn from her and help the people in need so that our world will become more beautiful.
【高分词汇】 grateful adj.感激的 kind adj.善良的 touch n.触动 bright adj.明亮的 【高分短语】
in front of sb.在某人前面 to one's surprise令某人惊讶的是 offer sth. to sb.提供某物给某人 at that moment就在那时 learn from向……学习 【高分句子】
（1）He looked so cold and hungry that he could not move.他看上去又冷又饿以至于不能移动。 （2）The girl went away with a beautiful smile on her face.那女孩脸上带着美丽的微笑走了。
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(3)We should learn from her and help the people in need so that our world will become more beautiful.我们应该向她学习帮助需要帮助的人，这样的话这个世界将会变得更加美丽四、高分集训
（一）
(平顶山一中模拟试题改编）英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me most”的英语文章。
内容要点如下：
（1）对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁； （2）她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；
（3）作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作； （4）所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生； （5）我希望……. 要求
（1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； （2）90个词左右；
（3）第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2—3句话补充完整。
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（二）
(郑州外国语模拟试题改编）我们每个人心中都有一个美好的童话故事。想必大家都知道《乌鸦喝水》这个
童话故事。现在要进行这个童话故事的英语编写大赛，看看谁的编写最精彩，
故事主要内容包括：
（1）乌鸦口渴了，到处找水喝
（2）一块大岩石附近有个装着水的瓶子，他来到瓶子前； （3）瓶颈太长，他喝不着水
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（4）他放一北小石头进入瓶子 （5）水升上来，他可以喝到水了 作文要求： （1）80—100词；
（2）语句连贯，内容要有适当添加，让作文更精彩。 参考词汇：岩石rock，瓶颈the bottle’s neck
Crow（乌鸦）Drank water
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（郑州八中月考试题改编）初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（80-100词，请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。
提示词语：
memories， one of, happy/sorry
How time flies! ______________________________________________________________
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（四）
(新乡一中月考试题改编）“你养我长大，我陪你变老。”父母一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学
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会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
（1）给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
（2）努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件； （3）拥有爱心，教我学会……
（4）今天，我要为您……（自主发挥，至少两点） 注意：
（1）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）文中不得出现真实的地名，校名、人名等信息。
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. _____________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
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The Person Who Has Inflenced Me most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor. she often says she can never be too much careful in doing her job. She often works over time. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her.I also hope that she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself and enjoy her own life.
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Crow drank water
A crow was very thirsty. He looked for water everywhere. Finally, he found some water in a bottle near a big rock. He came to the bottle and stood next to the bottle. But he couldn’t drink the water, because the bottles neck was very long. He thought and thought. and then flew away. After some time, he came back with a smoll stone in his mouth. He went up to the bottle and put the stone into the bottle. He flew away and flew back again and again. He put many stones into the bottle. The water in the bottle came up to its neck and the bird could drink it then.
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A Story in My Memory
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my hoppiness and sadhess with you.
I had a lot of memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember clearly, when I began to learn English. I found it too diffiult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couidn’t do well in it and most gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by litte I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so Lucky to become one of her students. Ive learned a lot from her. Helping others is a virtue. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
（四） Thank you, my father!
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care of me all the time.When I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me.In order to let me live a plesant life and receive good education, you always work hard from moring to evening every day. You are also a man who has a heart full of love.
You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a kind person. in the post. I never said \"I love yor” to you. Today is Father’s Doy. I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results.
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
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