Iamoneofthetopstudentsinmyschool.IlikewatchingTVafterdoingmyhomework.However,myfatherdoesn'tallowmetodoit.Becauseheworriesthatitwillhaveabadinfluenceonmystudy.Idisgreewithhimaboutit.
AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnecessaryforustowatchTVinsparetime.Firstly,IcangainalotofknowldgeandbroadeninexperiencesbywatchingTV.Secondly,itcankeepmeinformedaboutthenationalandinternationalcurrentaffairs.Finally,itcanmakemyheartrelaxandreducemystudystress. Asstudents,wearesupposedtoworkhardatourlessons.Nevertherless,itisnotabadthingforustowatchTV,anditisveryusefulforustogetsomeinformationbyreasonablechoice.what'smore,ifwecancopewithourstudiesandentertainment,ourstudywon'tbeaffectedatallandwe won'tbeaddictedtoit.
Therefore,Iintendtotalktomyfathertoconveymyideas.IamsurethathewillknowwhatImean. 推荐人：沈庆（sophia150）老师
理由：观点鲜明，条理清晰，过渡恰当，挺不错的！
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