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Dear Li Mei,
With the mid-term exam come,you must get prepared for them.I think that you need is a right study method.As we all know,there are three stage in study—preview,study in class and review,among which review was the most important.You should first make a review plan,then stick to it.I follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study.It turns out to be good enough.Of course,there are more than one way to review.So long as you review regular,I’m sure you can find more ways to study well.If you have any question of subjects,you may ask me I’m glad to help you.We may meet in our school library every Friday afternoon. Best regards.
Yours, Li Hua
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Traveling is a very good activity. When you were free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of the nature. You can make new friend or learn about different cultures. However, traveling isn’t always pleased. For example, you may be caught by the rain and may catch a cold. Sometimes, you may have your money steal. Therefore, when going on a trip, you must prepare you carefully. You should
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have clear information about the weather and very careful about what you go to avoid accidents. If not, you will surely enjoy yourself.
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My cousin Tim is pupil. He is clever, and he is very naughty. Today he fails in his math and English exam. Getting his report, he was deep worried. His poor report was required to be signed by his father at home. On the way to home an idea appeared on his mind. He found his father was reading a newspaper before he got home. Tim said to his father jokingly,
“Dad, can you write your name with all of your eyes shut?” His father replied.
“Of course not, my dear.” And his father did so. Tim was satisfied with the report already signed by his father.
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My uncle and their friends had dinner together yesterday. He was such happy that he drunk too much. However, when it was time to go to home, he insisted on driving home herself.
It was midnight and very dark. Soon, my uncle find the car out of his control. Shortly after he was not able to see the road clear, he drove into a tree along the road and got seriously injure.
Luckily enough, he rushed to the nearest hospital. When he came back to life, he found a policeman waiting for him. He had to turn on
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his driving license and wait to be punished by law. What regretful he was!
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In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reason. Some families are so poor to send their children to school, so their kids have to earn money to support their families. There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school. They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school. I feel worried this. I think every children should have the opportunity to receive education. And it is necessary of us to care about the children, because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country. So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their studies.
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After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema, we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her cry. When we asked she lived, she said she did not know. So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her. After that we went to the cinema. And when we got there, the movie was almost
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over. Although we missed the movie, but we felt very happy because
we did a well deed.
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Dear Mary，
I have received your E-mail. Don’t worried about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. I’m afraid that I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hardly, you will succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’m looking forward to hearing a good news from you!
Yours,
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Have you ever been boring with the busy life in the city? If so, have glimpse of the primary forest with me. The breath-taking scenery make you forget everything when you’re exploring what the forest has to offer. With tens of thousands of trees surrounded you, you will fee like to floating on the green ocean. Under the leaves are
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all kinds of flowers, peacefully and shy. A wide variety of birds were singing happily in the trees. While you’re enjoying the scenery on the ground, watching out for the sky! It will give your eye a feast. Wandering alone in the forest, we will have the feeling of returning to nature.
Li Hua
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I have learnt English for a long period, so I often make mistakes when speak the language. I wonder what will happen if I will meet with a native speaker . The English corner is the place where I can practice my speaking English. In a really situation, I can talk to others about however I want to say. In this way, I am sure I will speak English quite good very soon. What’s more, it offer a chance for me to make friends. I can meet kind of people. Gradually we come to know each other and to become friends.
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One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went
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out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
短文改错答案 61
第一句:come→coming;them→it 第二句:that→what 第三句:stage→
stages;was→is第五句:去掉a 第七句:are→is 第八句:regular→regularly第九句:of→about;me后加and
答案62：Traveling is a very good activity. When you were free, you can go to a beautiful place to
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enjoy the beauty of nature. You can make new friend or learn about different cultures. However,
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money steal. Therefore, when going on a trip, you must prepare stolen
you carefully. You should have clear information about the yourself
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【小题1】is后面加a 【小题2】and改为but【小题3】fails改为failed 【小题4】exam改为exams 【小题5】deep改为deeply 【小题6】去掉to 【小题7】On改为in 【小题8】Before改为when 【小题9】all改为both 【小题10】去掉not 答案64
76.there--his 77. such--so 78. 第二个to删掉 79. herself--himself 80.find--found 81. clear--clearly 82. injure--injured 83. he后加was
84. on--in 85. what--how 答案65
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【小题1】reason 改为reasons 形容词different后面接名词的复数形式。 【小题2】so 改为 too 固定词组too…to…太而…不能…
【小题3】parents 后加上 who或者that 本句应该使用定语从句修饰前面的先行词，指一些认为学习无用的父母。
【小题4】useless 改为useful 上下文串联，是指一些认为学习无用的父母不送孩子上学。
【小题5】去掉than 后的to 固定点评have sb do sth让某人做某事。 【小题6】 worried 后加上about 固定词组be worried about…担忧…
【小题7】 children 改为child 前面有every修饰，后面的名称使用单数形式。 【小题8】 of 改为for 形容词necessary不是表示人的性格特征的形容词，使用不能使用of，只有表示人的性格特质的形容词后面才接of。
【小题9】play后加an 固定词组play an important part in…在…中起重要的作用。 【小题10】 leave 改为leaving 介词from后面接动名词的形式。 考点：考查短文改错
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1.ask---asked 2.In---On 3.the—a 4.cry—crying 5.asked后加where 6.him—her 7.polices—police 8.And—But9.but去掉 10.well-good
短文改错67 Dear Mary，
I have received your E-mail. Don’t worried about me. I’m getting on well with my worry或worried前加be
research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason to learning
is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. I’m afraid that I that lost
can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the but
world today and it will be ∧important tool in our future work . Beside, it is becoming more an Besides
more important in our daily life. If you study hardly, you will succeed. Do remember that hard
where there is a will, there is a way. I’m looking forward to hearing a good news from you!
Yours, Li Hua
改错68 boring---bored have后a make—makes surrounded-surrounding 去掉to peacefully—peaceful were—are watching—watch eye—eyes we—you 改错69
so-----but speak-----speaking或^speak前加I 第二个will去掉 speaking-----spoken really------real however------whatever
good-----well offer-----offers kind-----kinds 第二个to去掉
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