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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter on the issue of employment for gradutes. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 就业的形势越来越严峻，东西部人才供需并不均衡。 2. 你认为是否应在西部就业及其原因

【范文】

The Issue of Employment for Gradutes

As we all know, the situation of employment graduate is urgent nowadays. Employment becomes a major social issue in our country. More and more people pay great attention to it.

This issue result from two aspects. First many undergraduates are finding jobs. They hope to get a job with high salary and other pensions. So the government and the society face great pressure. More job opportunities are needed to create for them. On the other hand, there are many vacancies of jobs in the west. So there comes an imbalance between the supply and demand in the east and the west. Few people want to seek jobs in the west. They prefer to live in the major cities, such as Beijing , shanghai and other developped areas.

To solve this issue, it is a better choice to encourage people to seek jobs in the west. This also help to develop local economy and offer a brandew chance for graduates.

写作——热门话题分析

1.校园生活

相关话题：学生兼职/就业﹑出国留学﹑校外住宿﹑大学生选课以及课外活动等

热门词汇：

part-time job 兼职工作 economic burden经济负担

working experience 工作经历 competition and cooperation竞争与合作 tuition学费 course arrangement 课程安排

extracurricular activities课外活动 distance education远程教育

required coursecompulsory course必修课 take an examinationsit an examination 参加考试

live outside campus 住在校外 food services饮食 application form 申请表 withdrawdraw cash 取钱 instructor 辅导老师 student union 学生会 undergraduate 本科生 postgraduate研究生 credit学分 degrees学位 经典句式：

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① In recent years, studying abroad has become a new craze among college students.

如今，留学在大学生中成为一种新的热潮。

② With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market.

随着大学的扩招，越来越多的毕业生在就业市场面临激烈的竞争。

③ Diploma and certificates are still significant standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. 学位和证书仍然是很多雇主衡量一个人能力的重要标准。为了增加找工作资格条件，学生们被迫不断参加考试。

④ During the holidays, a growing number of students choose to be volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. 在假期，大量的学生选择做志愿者，做兼职工作或者参加其他类似的实践活动。

⑤ Some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. Therefore, we are supposed to try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.

有些学生花大量的时间做兼职工作，从而忽视了他们的学业。因此我们应该平衡社会实践和学习之间的关系。 2.网络科技:

相关话题：电脑/互联网的普及﹑信息安全﹑媒体广告、通讯设备的进步﹑网络教学及网上阅读﹑网上娱乐(游戏﹑博客﹑开心牧场等) 热门词汇：

cyber culture计算机文化 online love affairs网恋 net bar网吧 shopping online网上购物 cyber chat网上聊天 virtual net 虚拟网络 net partner网友 surf the Internet网上冲浪 net citizen网民 cyberspace网络空间

cyber college网络大学 convenient and effective方便有效 e-bank电子银行 kill time打发时间

information security信息安全 the popularity of computer电脑的普及 be addicted to对„„上瘾 campus network校园网络 release one’s pressure减轻压力 e-mail电子邮箱 经典句式：

① No invention has received more praise and abuse than the Internet. 没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

② It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

人们普遍认为现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化，近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。

③ As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become extremely popular among college students.

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作为现代电脑和网络的产物，网络游戏已经在大学生中变得相当普及。 ④ But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. 但是，正如我们看到的，一些缺乏自律的学生沉迷于网络游戏以至于影响了健康和学习。

⑤ More significantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.

更重要的是，它能带给大学生们很多快乐并且极大地减轻压力。 3. 体育健康

相关话题：体育运动、节食减肥、吸烟、流行性疾病、心理疾病 热门词汇：

lung cancer 肺癌 smoking-related diseases抽烟引起的疾病 lose weight减肥 go on die节食

under the weather生病、不舒服 flight-headed头昏眼花 drowsy昏昏欲睡 flu 流感

epidemics瘟疫 rampant猖獗的

contract infections得传染病 pick up the habit 养成这种习惯

physical and mental condition身体与精神状态 overweight/fat(肥胖的) mentally unhealthy精神不健全的 be good for/do good to对„„有益处 good living habits良好的生活习惯 take regular exercise进行有规律的运动 unhealthy eating habit不健康的饮食习惯 junk food垃圾食品 stay/keep healthy/fit保持健康

build up one’s body/ improve one’s health强身健体 经典句式：

① Epidemics are rampant throughout the whole human history, and they have caused the most devastating impacts on us.

在整个人类历史上瘟疫肆虐，他们给我们带来了灾难性的影响。

② For example, the outbreak of H1N1once killed lots of people and brought great economic loss to the whole country.

例如，H1N1甲型流感的爆发夺去了很多人的生命并且给整个国家带来了重大经济影响。

③ According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。 ④ Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life. 孩子们正处于身体快速发育时期，缺乏体育锻炼可能会对他们未来的生活造成严重的影响。

⑤ In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。

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