如何写活动介绍类作文
2. 按照要点顺序列出写作提纲。
3. 要点之间可以用序数词或过渡性的句子衔接。
写好中考作文的十个简单原则
1. 是表达,而不是印象。2. 简单的句子效果最好。 3. 主动,而不是被动。
4. 了解目标受众。5. 大声朗读。
6. 尽量避免使用行话。7. 词的长短也很重要。 8. 肯定比否定要更好——即使在写作中!
9. 留下时间来修改和重写——在你写完全部内容后。 10. 写下来。每时每刻。
写活动介绍类作文的三点建议
1. 了解题目要求和要点内容,写作时注意总分结构的使用。
中考英语作文满分必备万能句
1. It goes without saying that... /(It is) needless to say (that).../ It is obvious that...不用说…… ►It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.不用说早睡早起是值得的。 2. Among various kinds of.../ Of all the... 在各种……之中
►Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. 在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。学科#网 3. In my opinion/To my mind/ As far as I am concerned/ I am of the opinion that... 就我的看法……; 我认
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为……
►In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
4. With the increase/growth of the population... 随着人口的增加…… With the advance of science and technology... 随着科技的进步……
►With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass. 随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。
5. It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that... ……是必要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that... ……是重要的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that... ……是适当的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that... ……是紧急的
►It is proper for us to keep the public places clean. = It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.我们应当保持公共场所的清洁。 6. spend... on sth. / doing sth.花费
►We shouldn’t spend too much time on something we aren’t interested in. 我们不应该在我们不感兴趣的事情上花太多的时间。 7. how引导的感叹句
►At least it will prove how honest you are. 那至少可以证明你很诚实。
8. 状语从句If you don’t..., you’ll... 如果你不……,你就会……;so... that... 如此……,以至于…… ►If you don’t keep working hard, you’ll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作,你就会失去这次机会。 ►At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。 9. 宾语从句
I think / I don’t think that... 我认为,…… / 我认为……不 I wonder whether...我想知道是否……
►He doesn’t think I should stop him joining the club. 他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。 10. Since + 过去式,S + 现在完成式
►Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中,他就一直很用功。
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介绍节日的作文模板 How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. I’d like to introduce __________(节日名) to you. __________(节日名) is __________(重要性) important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for __________(持续时间). Days before the festival, people __________(节日活动一). They __________(节日活动二). On the eve of the festival, __________(节日活动三). Then __________(节日活动四)... (节日传 统一、节日传统二) How happy we are.
典例一(2016 • 湖北孝感)3月5日是学雷锋纪念日,你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华,请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary。学科#网 活动时间:3月5日
活动地点:幸福敬老院(Nursing Home) 参与人员:志愿者
活动形式:1. 送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。
2. 帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生……
3. 陪老人聊天;为老人表演(唱歌、跳舞),读报……
活动感想:此活动很有意义,从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人…… 要求:1. 要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不要逐字翻译,须适当发挥。
2. 词数100字左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.
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If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.
As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were!
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.
From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly. If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us. Yours, Li Hua 名师点评 提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想
象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。学&科网 亮点回放 该文多次使用固定句型,为短文增色不少。如As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. 作为志愿者的一员,我起得很早,因为我太兴奋了。How
happy they were! 他们是多么的快乐!From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. 从这个有意义的活动中,我发现我们应该关心和尊重他们。
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典例二(2016 • 海南)假设你是李明。上周日你班举行了一次毕业聚会。请根据以下提示,给你的英国笔友 Robert 写一封邮件,向他描述聚会的情况及谈谈你当时的感受。 要求:1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2. 必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥; 3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4. 词数 80左右。(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数) Hi Robert,
We had a graduation party last Sunday.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have such a party? Please write soon. Yours, Li Ming 【参考范文】 Hi Robert,
We had a graduation party last Sunday.
Long before 3:00 pm, all the students in my class couldn’t wait to come to the hall. Our teachers and parents were invited to the party, too. First, our monitor made a speech. He thanked our teachers and parents sincerely. Next, we gave presents to each other. The most exciting moment was the show time. We sang, danced and played games. Our English teacher told a story which made us all laugh. Everyone was so happy. I think the wonderful party will always be in my mind.
Do you have such a party? Please write soon. Yours, Li Ming 名师点评 本文叙述的上周日举行的一次毕业聚会,向笔友 Robert描述聚会的情况及谈谈当时的感受。这里叙述的是过去的事情,所以句子一般用一般过去时,要注意所写的句子要
符合英语语法,要注意上下文的衔接,要使用自己熟悉句式和词汇。
亮点回放 短文用了一些短语和句式,如:couldn’t wait to do sth.迫不及待地做某事;make a speech
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做演讲;give sth. to sb.把某物给某人;make sb.do sth.使某人做某事。用了which引导的定语从句,增加了文章的亮点。
A(2016 • 辽宁辽阳首山镇第二初级中学九年级10月月考)
假如你叫王雷,请给你的笔友Lucy写封信,介绍一下你最喜欢的节日——春节。 注意书信的格式。(80词左右)学&科网
要点:1. When is Spring Festival? 2. When do people eat?
3. What do people do? 4. Why do you like it so much?
参考词汇和句式 单词 短语 句式 relative, present, earn lucky money, ask sb. to do sth., give back to If引导的条件状语从句 B
2016年4月23日,我市\"周恩来读书节\"开幕了。我们班将组织\"与好书为友,以读书为乐\"的主题活动。请根据以下提示,用英语写一段话,词数:80—l00之间,内容必须包括以下要点: 1. 读书意义 活动计划 个人愿望或感受; 2. 了解世界 找些好书; 3. 带来快乐 用好时间; 4. 培养习惯 做好笔记 。
注意:1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名; 2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
On April 23, 2012, Zhou Enlai Reading Festival in our city opened. Our class will organize a reading activity
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Spring Festival begins on the first day of the first month.
Spring Festival is an excellent day for every Chinese, especially for children. During the festival, relatives go to visit each other and give presents to each other. Then it’s the happy moment for children, children are given some lucky money. But I’m not a child any longer. I want to make the festival a little bit different. I plan to have a different day. I’m going to sell some toys in the flower market. I will ask my friends to join me. If I earn some money, I’ll buy some presents for my parents. Well, it’s my turn to give back to my parents for their love.
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On April 23, 2012, Zhou Enlai Reading Festival in our city opened. Our class will organize a reading activity —Be Friends with Good Books and Take Delight in Reading. I think it is important for us to read books because they can help us learn more about the world, bring us enjoyment and develop good habits. For this reading activity, we have made lots of plans. First, we are going to have more helpful books. Good books are like good friends. Second, we plan to make full use of our time to read books as many as possible. Third, we are going to take notes after reading. I hope we can read more books and improve ourselves a lot from this activity.
中考英语作文培训
中考英语作文阅卷三个标准: 1) 结构 2)内容要点 3)语言(词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词)看结构和内容要点定分数档,看语言给成绩。 中考作文审题五个步骤:(定时态——定结构——正确句型)
审题的训练对于每个学生都不陌生,我要说的是审题一定要做到四个方面 一审主题(写什么), 二审人称(用什么人称写)
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三审体裁(记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议),
四审时态(时态中考两个错误扣一分,三个降一档), 五审内容要点(一定要在试卷中画出,免得写的时 候忘记,导致跑题)
中考满分作文五个关键点: “结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,结构十分清晰。“观点(总)——要点(分)——总结(总)”让人一目了然。
三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,
第二段:分2-3点说明。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论,要有升华。
要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点, 要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文 章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词 等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, so far, as far as 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally
表因果的过渡语for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, so, as a result (of) 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, and so on
表推进的过渡语:what’s more, on one hand… on the other hand…, not only…but also…,besides, 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general,
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬 性的。如,单词的使用,时态,人称等。
亮点: 当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful, good-looking, B 篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。但是对于写作基础不是很好的同学,切不要因为追求“亮点”而用“错句,错词”,以稳妥为重! 英语作文万能句子
段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people
as to ____ .Some people suggest that____. There is an old saying______. 2. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。 Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like______ Because ______. Besides,______.
3.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 4人类正面临着一个严重的问题…,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ..., which is becoming more and more serious. 5.如今,人们普遍认为...,但是我怀疑...。
Nowadays,it is generally/commonly believed that..., but I wonder that... 6.“如同硬币的正反面,...也有积极的一面和消极的一面。
Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to... 7.“随着...的快速增长,...在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。
Along with the rapid growth of ..., ...has become increasingly important in our daily
8列举时可以用 First of all, 首先 secondly,其次 beside, 另外 what's more, 另外 last but not least 最后的但不是不重要的
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