PeriodFour Writing—Creativewriting:poemsreview
本单元要求学生根据自己所熟悉的古诗,用英语写出其大意,并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想。首先应该很好地理解诗歌的寓意,抓住诗歌的主题,围绕诗歌中描述的具体细节进行有重点的写作。切忌抛开诗歌中所体现的意境展开空洞的叙述;其次在确定主题后,要适当运用一些高级词汇和复杂句式,以增加文章的亮点。另外要注意不要抄写原诗句,一定要按照词数要求,语义要连贯,结构要完整,句子要通顺。
1.Thepoemiswrittenbythefamouspoet... 2.Itisrhymedattheendofeveryline.
3.Wecanappreciatetheimageof...throughthepieceofpoem. 4.Inthepoem,wecansense/find...
5.Thepoetexpressedhis/herfeelingsof...inthepoem. 6.Thispoemhassuccessfullytouchedtheheartsofthereaders.
请根据唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》,用英语写出这首诗的大意,并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想,以便向你的外国朋友解释。
SympathyontheFarmers
Atnoon,afarmerisweeding, Downthefield,sweatisdropping. Whoknowsriceonadish, Everygrainisfullofmoiling?
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注意:
1.不得照抄短诗原文;
2.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开; 3.必须突出短诗的主题,结构完整,语义连贯; 4.短文不能写成诗歌形式; 5.词数100左右。
写作要求是用英语解释一首中国诗歌的含义,也就是改写诗歌。写作时应注意下面几点: 1.确定文体:这是一篇记叙文。写作时注意记叙文的写作特点。 2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是解释一首诗歌,所以人称应该以第三人称为主。
联想词汇
1.一首题目是……的诗apoemtitled... 2.受欢迎bepopularwith 3.在这夏日的正午atthissummernoontime 4.掉到土里fallintothesoil 5.来自于comefrom 6.提醒人们……remindpeopleof... 7.对……有更好的了解haveabetterunderstandingof... 句式升级
1.这是一首题目为《悯农》的诗,是很受中国读者欢迎的李绅写的。 Hereisapoemtitled
“
SympathyontheFarmers
”
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whichwaswrittenbyLiShen.HeispopularwithChinesereaders.(并列句)
Hereisapoemtitled“SympathyontheFarmers”byLiShenwhoispopularwithChinesereaders.(定语从句)
2.虽然夏日的正午外面很热,农民们还是在地里劳作。
Althoughitishotoutsideatthissummernoontime,thefarmersarestillweedinginthefields.(although) Hotasitisoutsideatthissummernoontime,thefarmersarestillweedinginthefields.(as) 3.为了提醒人们农民辛勤劳作的重要性,李绅写了这首诗。 LiShenwrotethispoem
becausehewantedtoremindpeopleoftheimportanceofthefarmers’hardwork.(复合句)
LiShenwrotethispoem(inorder)toremindpeopleoftheimportanceofthefarmers’hardwork.(简单句)
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Hereisapoemtitled“SympathyontheFarmers”byLiShenwhoispopularwithChinesereaders. Itgoeslikethis
:
Hotasitisoutsideatthissummernoontime
,,
thefarmersarestillweedinginthefields.Theyaresweatingallover
andconstantlytheirsweatfallsintothesoil,wherethecropsgrow.Butwhoknowsexactlyallourfood,thedeliciousdishesonourtable,comefromthehardworkofthefarmers?
LiShenwrotethispoeminordertoremindpeopleoftheimportanceofthefarmers’hardwork.FromwhereIstand
,
it’sespeciallyimportantthattheyounggenerationstodayshouldhaveabetterunderstandingofnotwastingfood.
Ⅰ.阅读理解
(2018·江西崇仁二中高二检测)
OneadvantageoftheInternetisshoppingconvenientlyonlineforclothesonedisadvantageoftheInternetisalsoshoppingconvenientlyonlineforclothes.
“
Nothingfits
,
”
saidLamYukWong
,;
aseniorinelectricalandcomputerengineeringatRiceUniversity.
“Everyonesaysthis.Theyorderclothesandtheydon’tfit.Peoplegetveryunhappy.”
Wongandherdesignpartner,Xuaner“Cecilia”Zhang,arecreatorsofwhattheycalla“virtual(虚拟
)
fittingroom
”
.
Theirgoalissimpleandconsumer-friendly
:
toletonlineclothingshoppershaveaperfectfitandaperfectlookwhenshoppingeverytime.BothwomenarefromChina
,
WongfromHongKongandZhangfromBeijing.Theybothordermostoftheirclothingonline.Theygottheideafromtheirownexperiencesasconsumersandfromlisteningtothecomplaintsoftheirfriendsandrelatives.
“
Theysay
,
‘Thecoloriswrong’or‘Igottherightsizebutitstilldoesnotfit.’Wewanttomakeitlikeyou’reinthestoretryingontheclothes,”Zhangsaid.
UsingaKinectdevelopedbyMicrosoftforusewithitsXbox360videogameplayer
,
ZhangscansWongandturnsherimageinto,ineffect,avirtualmodel,keepingWong’sdimensions,andevenherskinandhaircolor.
“Weputtheclothesontheshopper’s3-Dbodymodelsandshowhowtheylookwhentheyaredressed,”Wongsaid.Sofar
,
WongandZhanghaveadaptedthesoftwaretoshowdressesandshirts
,
andtheyarenowworkingonshorts.
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AskedifshethoughtmenaswellaswomenmightbeinterestedinusingtheirvirtualfittingroomWongsaid,“Ithinktheirwiveswillcareaboutthis,soitwillalsobeimportanttomen.” 语篇解读 本文讲述了两个女士设计和开发“虚拟试衣室”的过程。
1.Whyisshoppingconvenientlyonlineforclothesadisadvantage? A.Studentsmayeasilygetaddictedtoit. B.Clothesboughtonlinemaynotfit. C.Itattractsmoreonlineclothingshoppers. D.Itcausesshopperstowastetoomuchmoney. 答案 B 解
析
推
理
判
断
题
。
根
据
第
二
段
最
后
两
,
句
“Theyorderclothesandtheydon’tfit.Peoplegetveryunhappy.”可知,本题答案为B。 2.WongandZhanggottheideatodesignavirtualfittingroomfrom. A.theirshoppingexperiences B.aprogramattheiruniversity C.someshop-owners’complaints D.theXbox360videogameplayer 答案 A 解
析
细
节
理
解
题
。
根
据
第
三
段
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的
“Theygottheideafromtheirownexperiencesasconsumersandfromlisteningtothecomplaintsoftheirfriendsandrelatives.”可知,她们设计虚拟试衣室的想法源于自己的购物经历和亲朋好友的抱怨。故选A。
3.Whichofthefollowingshowstheprocessofusingthevirtualfittingroom? A.Scanning—tryingonclothes—gettingimages. B.Tryingonclothes—gettingmodels—scanning. C.Scanning—gettingmodels—tryingonclothes. D.Tryingonclothes—gettingimages—scanning. 答案 C
解析 细节理解题。根据第四段的介绍可知,使用虚拟试衣室的步骤是:扫描——得到模特——试穿衣服。故选C。
4.WhatdidWongthinkofhervirtualfittingroom? A.Itisperfectlydeveloped. B.Itwillhaveitsmarketshare. C.Itislimitedtowomenshoppers.
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D.Itislikeakindofvideogameplayer. 答案 B
解析 推理判断题。根据文章倒数第二段最后一句和最后一段可知,虽然她们的虚拟试衣室目前只有女装试衣室,但她们正在拓展男装试衣室,并且认为人们会对此感兴趣,由此可推知,Wong认为自己的虚拟试衣室会有自己的市场份额。故选B。 Ⅱ.七选五
(2017·陕西西北大学附中高二检测)
Holidayswithfriendscanbegreatfunandagoodwayofgettingtoknoweachotherbetter.Onceyouareonholiday,thetripcanbefulloffantasticmemoriesifit’splannedcorrectly. •Chooseadestination
5Goingabroadwillcostmorebutbeamoreexcitingexperience.Goingtoadifferentplaceinyourowncountrycanalsobefunandwillbecheaper. •Collectyourfriends
Findouthowmuchinterestthereisfrompeopletogoonthetripandworkoutyourmaximumandinvitethosewhoyougetonwellwith. •Meetup
Everyonewillhavetheirownideaofwhatthetriptobelike,someetupatalocalcafeorrestaurant,andshareyourideasandconcerns.6Don’ttrytooverpowerthem.Onceyou’veallsharedideasyou’llhaveamuchbetterideaofhowtostartorganizingthetrip. •Lookforaccommodation
7Whenyouaresearchingforaplacetostay,
readreviewsandratings(
等,
级).Bookitassoonaspossiblebecauseleavingittoolateisgoingtomakethingsharder. •Booktransport
Onceyouhaveaccommodation
you’llknowthedatesofyourstayandwillbeabletobooktransport,coach,bus,airplane,etc.8 •Choosethingsyouwanttodothere
Whenyouareonyourtripitwillbemorerelaxingifyouhaveagoodideaofwhatkindofthingsyouwanttodo.ResearchtheareaontheInternetandbooksomeactivitiesyouwanttojoinin.9Don’tbookaloadofthingswhichyoucan’tafford. A.Matchtheactivitiestoyourbudget. B.Onepersonwillnaturallybetheleader. C.Thefirststepistoworkoutwhereyouwanttogo. D.Checkoutthepassportisyourown.
E.Bookingtransportwellinadvancelowersthecostdramatically,sopleasedoitsoon. F.Findoutyourhotelneartotheplaceyouwanttovisit.
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G.Makesurethatthetriptotheforeigncountryisnottoolong. 答案 5.C 6.B 7.F 8.E 9.A Ⅲ.语法填空
(2017·吉林长春十一中高二检测)
Inthepast
,
ittookalongtimeforpeopletofindsomeone.Nowadays
,
,
however,10.withthehelpofonlinecommunitiespeoplecangettheirsearch11.done(do) withinashortperiodoftime.Alltheyneedtodoisgetonlineanduploadapictureofthepersonthey12.arelooking(look) for,orsharesomebasicinformationaboutthisperson.Becauseofthe“footprints”people13.haveleft(leave) online
,
otherInternetusersare14.usually(usual) abletofindanyonewhotheyareinterestedin.
Oneexampleofthisisamanwhobeatadogcruelly.His15.violence(violent) wasrecordedanduploadedonline.Inaveryshorttimethemanwasreportedtoananimalrescueteam.Intheendlean(clean) upafterherdogonthesubway.Netizensrevealedherpersonalinformationinordertopunishher.18.Widely(wide)
blamedforherbehavior
“
witch-hunt
,”,,
hewaspunishedandmadetoapologize.16.Anotherexampleinvolvesacollegestudentwhorefused17.tocthisgirlleftcollegeeventually.Manypeoplethusbegantodebate19.whetheralikethiswenttoofarornot. Ⅳ.短文改错
(2017·江西南昌三中高二检测)
Severaldaysbefore
,
Iwasoutwithmyfriendsatalocalfastfoodrestaurant.Thefoodweatewasgoodbutwehadfuntogether.Beforeweleftfortherestaurant
,
wefoundthatitalsosoldicecream.Wegotexcitingbecausewehadn’teatenicecreamforalongtime.OneofmyfrienddecidedtobuyallofusicecreamandintherestaurantThenthemancameinwithhisson
,
,
theyallscreamedwithjoy
!,
whowantedtobuyicecreameither.Intheend
hedecidestopayforouricecream.Wemovedbysuchanactofkindnessonahotday. 答案
Severaldays
before
ago
,butandexcitingexcitedfriendfriends
Iwasoutwithmyfriendsatalocalfastfoodrestaurant.Thefoodweatewasgoodwehadfuntogether.Beforeweleft for therestaurant,wefoundthatitalsosoldicecream.Wegotbecausewehadn’teatenicecreamforalongtime.Oneofmy
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decidedtobuyallofusicecreamandintherestaurant,mancameinwithhisson
,
theythe
allscreamedwithjoy!Thenwea
either
too
.Intheend
,
he
decidesdecided
whowantedtobuyicecream
∧
topayforouricecream.Weweremovedbysuchanactofkindnessonahotday. Ⅴ.书面表达
请阅读下面这首小诗,以“WhatIsLife?”为题,展开适当的想象,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
WhatIsLife?
Lifeisagift—acceptit. Lifeisastruggle—faceit. Lifeisasong—singit. Lifeisanadventure—dareit. Lifeisabeauty—praiseit. Lifeisamystery—unfoldit. Lifeisagame—playit. Lifeisapuzzle—solveit. Lifeisanopportunity—takeit. 注意:
1.必须结合短诗的内容,发挥想象,适当展开; 2.必须突出短诗的内容,结构完整,语义连贯; 3.短文不能写成诗歌的形式。 参考范文
WhatIsLife?
Whatislife?
Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Asthepoemsuggests
,
astruggle
,,
lifeisfullofupsanddowns.Peoplemayconsideritasagift
asongandsoon.Wemustfaceanddealwithitinapositiveandactiveway.Whenourlifecomesacrosssometrouble
,
suchasstruggles
,
adventuresorpuzzles
,
we’dbetterbravelyfaceit
,
dareitandsolveit.Don’tloseheart.Whenourlifegoestoasmoothroad,justlikeagift,asongorabeauty,wecertainlyenjoyit.
Infact
,
lifeisamixtureofopportunitiesandchallenges.Weshouldbeawareofthemandthentakethemtogether.Withallourheartsandpassions,wecanmakeourlifewonderful,colorfulandmeaningful.
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