2017年中考作文（写作秘籍）
技巧1：:认真审题，不能丢项。
拿到作文题目，首先要知道要求写什么。例如是写一件事，还是写一个人，还是写一份调查报告等。第二要明确题目中要求的内容有几条，例如要求写一篇游记，那么有如下内容：什么时间去的？和谁一起去的？去哪了？如何去的？做了什么？有什么感受？这就是内容上的六条要求，作文中必须有所体现，一条都不能丢。
技巧2：检查语法，时态，语态是否正确。
语法，时态，语态是一定不能错的，这考察的是英语的应用基础。
语法上要求明确句子当中的主谓一致，句子中只有一个谓语，动词短语的固定搭配（比如enjoy只能加doing,介词后如果要加动词一定是动名词的形式，即ing形式，情态动词直接加do等。），名词的单复数形式等。 时态上要求非常严格，如果出错将比其他地方出错更为严重。判断时态的根据在于题目要求写的内容，如果是纪事性文字，一般用过去时态，有时用现在完成时（看到since/for）,如果是议论性或说明性文字，一般用一般现在时（纪事性文字中议论抒情的部分一般也用一般现在时）。如果是一种计划或打算，要用一般将来时。具体题目，具体分析，另外明确这些时态的概念，再去判断。语态上要求也很严格，比如动词的第三人称单数形式，动词的主动语态与被动语态等。
技巧3：句子与句子之间的连词要准确的应用。 连词是让作文连贯的重要组成部分，句子与句子之间的逻辑关系就是靠连词体现出来的。作文是一个整体，决不是一个个孤立的句子，所以必须有连词，但一定根据语意正确使用。常见连词：if, as, for, because, so, however, though(虽然), even（甚至）, since, until, 等等（不全，要自己总结。）另外，有些连词不能一起使用。例如有because就不能有so,有though就不能有but等等。连词的应用会让作文提高一大块。
技巧4：使用从句表达（前提为有能力）。
如果英语的基础相当好，那么从句是可以帮助提高分数的重要途径。 初中需要掌握的从句是主语从句，宾语从句，（时间，地点，让步）状语从句，定语从句这四大类。
主语从句，就是主语是一个句子，多数用形式主语it代替，真正的主语用不定式或分词ing形式表达，例如：it is adj for sb. To do sth. 这句中it 就是形式主语，真正的主语是to do sth. 宾语从句就是宾语是个句子。有时用it作为形式宾语。例如：I find it adj to do sth. 这句中it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是to do sth. adj. 其实大多数宾语从句还是直接表达的，例如：I wonder to know that ……等。
状语从句分三种，时间状语从句，地点状语从句和让步状语从句。只需注意介词的使用，有时要使用逗号。特别的，让步状语从句中的if引导的是状语从句，注意“主将从现”（即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时。）。
定语从句是初中比较难掌握的，一般是要求识别，主要在单选题当中考察。但应用到作文中是出彩的地方，明确了先行词，用对了关系代词和关系副词，就可以了。基础在于对定语从句基础知识的理解，明确语法就可以应用了。
技巧5：必须有精彩的结束句。
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1)自然结尾，点明主题 随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2)首尾呼应，升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.
3)反问结尾，引起深思 这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun? 4)表达祝愿，阐述愿望 这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.
另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
句子
祈使句：表示请求、命令、建议或劝告等的句子叫祈使句，主语you通常省略。 1、祈使句的肯定形式：一般以动词原形开头。 Open the door, please. 2、祈使句的否定形式：在句首谓语动词前加Don't。 Don't be late for class.
3、说话对象是第一人称和第三人称时，表示建议做某事。 Let me/us Let him/her/them eg. Let's go to school. 注意： 1)祈使句 ＋ and/or ＋ 简单句是常用句型 祈使句 + and + 简单句 表示“如果…，就…” 祈使句 + or + 简单句 表示“…否则…”
eg. 1.Go down the street,and you'll see a hospital. 2.Be quick,or we'll be late. 句子的分类:由句子结构来讲，可分为三类简单
一、简单句：由一个主语(或并列主语)和一个谓语（或并列谓语）构成的句子。 eg. We cleaned the windows and tidied the room.
二、并列句：由并列连词and, but,so,or,for等把两个或两个以上的简单句连起来的句子。 eg. 1)I come from China and he comes from Japan. 2)Hurry up,or you'll miss the train. 3)He looked for it everywhere, but he couldn't find it.
4)She didn't know the answer to the question,so she asked the teacher. 5)He's interested in music while John is interested in sports.
三、复合句 A.宾语从句：宾语从句在复合句中作主句的宾语，引导宾语从句的关联词有that, if/whether, what, who, whose, which, why, when, where, how等。
1、连接词 1)由连接词that引导陈述句，在口语中that常省略。 eg. He said that he would like to see the headmaster.
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2)由连接词whether/if引导一般疑问句，whether和if 常可互换，但下列场合一般用whether. ①介词后的宾语从句：I'm thinking of whether he'll come. ②与or not连用：I don't know whether I should go or not.
3)由连接代词what,who(whom,whose)which或连接副词when,where,why,how引导特殊疑问句。 eg. Do you know who/whom she is waiting for?
2、语序：不管宾语从句是陈述句、一般疑问句或特殊疑问句，都要用陈述句语序，也就是说主谓次序不能颠倒。连接词＋主谓结构
(1).Bill wanted to know who did this. (2).I don't know what's the matter with Bob? (3).I don't know what's wrong with them?
3、时态：一般说来，主从句时态要统一。如果主句是一般现在时，从句可根据需要用其它任何时态；如果主句是一般过去时，从句应该用相应的过去时态范畴（也就是用一般过去时，过去进行时，过去将来时，过去完成时）。
eg.①Lily wanted to know whether her grandma liked the handbag. ②I asked the teacher where we would have the meeting. ③Could you tell me how I can get to the zoo? 如果从句表明的是一个客观事实或真理，那么无论主句是什么时态，从句都只能用一般现在时。 eg. The teacher told us that light travels much faster than sound.
注意：在think后的宾语从句，如果需要表示否定意义，一般不在宾语从句中否定，而是在主句中否定。 eg. I don’t think that English is easy. I think that English is not easy. ( 误)
中考英语作文十大常见错误分析
1.审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为\"我最喜欢的活动\"，偏离了\"一项、课外活动\"这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。 2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。 3.名词单复数问题：
误My father and my mother is all teacher.
正My fathe rand my mother are both teachers. 误：There are four books and a pen over there.
正：There is four books and a pen over there.（就近原则） 4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：\"我累了。\"这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.
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误I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. 正I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. 误The apples cheap. I'll take some. 正The apples are cheap. I'll take some. 5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting. 正Because of heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting. 6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。 误 I do not like she. 正： I do not like her. 7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend.
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend.
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等. 例1.When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do（F） (人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为When one has knowledge, he can do what he wants (to do).（T） 9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例： 误When I get to the station the train leave. 正When I got to the station the train had left.
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10.综合性错误：
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition 3.表转折对比关系的：However, On the contrary, but Although+clause（从句）, In spite of+n/doing On one hand… On the other hand… Some…, while others…
4.表因果关系的：Because, As So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；such as+n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know, In my opinion
9.表总结：In short, In a word. In conclusion, In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。 宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.
状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes. It's bad for our eyes to read books in the sun. 常用状语从句句型：
1）时间：when, not…until, as soon as 2）目的：so that+clause; to do（为了）
3）结果：so…that+clause, too…to do（太……以至于……） 4）条件：if, unless（除非）, as long as（只要） 5）让步：though, although, even though, even if no matter what/when/where/who/which/how 6)比较：as…as…, not so…as…, than
叙事文常用的句子间连接词： At first; at last; in the end… then/next/after that…
when/while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that
To one’s surprise/joy
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Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately… in a word/in all
议论文常用连接词
表示并列：either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also; 表示递进的：besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover);
表示原因的：because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; (for the reason that…); 表示结果的：so; as a result; so…that…; therefore;
表示目的的：so that…; in order that…; (in order) to…; for…;
表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…; 表示转折的：however; but;
表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say… 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last;
表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…;
表达个人想法的：I think/believe…; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally;
其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way; 作文万能句：
I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It takes sb. +时间+to do…
Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth. It’s important/necessary… for sb. to do… It’s time for sb. to do sth. It’s a waste of time to…
It’s …years since sb. have/has +过去分词 It’s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing It’s a pity that… It’s an honor to… There be …doing…
Great changes have taken place in… sth is/are well worth doing. It seems/seemed that… It is said that…
As the saying goes, …
…and …. are different in many ways.
There are many differences between … and … I have made up my mind to … I would rather …. than …
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It doesn’t matter if…
If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.
1. 重点句型
1). It is said that + 句子 据说… It is reported that + 句子 据报道…
2). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问…
3). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻，毫无疑问 4). There is no need to do 没必要做…
5). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 6. as is known to all, +句子 众所周知 7). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
8). … so … that … 如此… 以至于… … too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至于…
9). not…until… 直到…才… 例： I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back。 10).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。) 11). That is why + 句子 那是…的原因 12). That is because + 句子 那是因为… as we all know, +句子 据我们所知
it is generally/ publicly known / considered that…, 众所周知 2. 提建议
I suggest / advice that you should do 我建议你做… If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的话，我会做… It’s best to do 最好做…
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
how about / what about doing …怎么样? I think you should do 我认为你应该…
Why not do / why don’t you do…? 为什么不… 3. 。努力做… try to do努力做… strive to do 努力做…
try one’s best to do = do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做… make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做… do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做… spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做… 4. 表示喜欢和感兴趣 like / love doing enjoy doing
be fond of doing 喜欢做… be keen on n/doing 喜欢做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing
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5. 表示想/希望 want to do
= would like to do 想做… hope to do 希望做… expect to do 期待着做… wish to do 希望做… consider doing 考虑做… 6. 打算做… / 计划做… intend / plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算做… decide to do 决定做… determine to do决定做… be determined to do决定做…
make up one’s mind to do 下定决心做…
7. 只加doing 作宾语的动词 2011年中考英语满分作文七大类必背句型
finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢doing
look forward to doing 盼望做… keep on doing 坚持做… dream of doing 梦想做…
can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…
keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做… be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做…
spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做… have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 或 with + 名词 做…有困难 常用句型 （一）段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to……Some people suggest that …… 2.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ……. Many people like …… because …… Besides，…… 3. 任何事物都是有两面性。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages. 4. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem …… which is becoming more and more serious. （二）中间段落句
1.但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don't think it is a very good way to solve …….For example，……Worst of all，……. 2. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
……is necessary and important to our country's development and construction. First，……What's more, ……Most important of all,……
3. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
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There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can……
4. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因是……。 Why…… The first reason is that ……The second reason is ……The third is…….
5. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ……also has its own disadvantages, such as ……
6. 完全同意……这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： I fully agree with the statement that ……because……. （三）结尾句
1. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……；第二，……；最后……但同样重要的是……
In my opinion, I think it necessary to……The reasons are as follows. First …… second …… Last but not least,……
2. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether ……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….However, from a personal point of view, I find……
广东中考真题
How to Keep Safe in School (2010)
Do you know that our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example，one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two week. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.
My Earth Hour 2011 (没参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was a pity that I didn't realize it was Earth Hour until I watched news on TV. At that time. I was shopping with my mother at the mall. As a student, I have done lots of
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things to protect the environment. For example,I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides. I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doinp so. Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year. I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. (86 words)
My Earth Hour 2011 (有参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. At that moment my friends and I waited for a long time. We talked and played games at home with all the lights off. We were glad to be in the Earth Hour. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. (90 words)
2012
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I can't stand bad manners in public, either. In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas. I think it's wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion, we should know more about good manners. On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude. If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help. Yours,
Li Ming (92 words)
2013
面对谎言
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for him.
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Later I found him playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He didn’t tell the lie. I would do the duty for him if he asked.
As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.
That’s all. Thank you. (95 words) 面对骗局
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.
As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.
That’s all. Thank you.(95 words) 面对谣言
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.
As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.
That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)
2015
Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning
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accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry. If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.
Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.
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