2012二模作文——海淀、朝阳、西城、东城、丰台、石景山、门头沟、房山、怀柔、昌平、大兴、密云、通州、延庆、平谷、顺义、燕山 海淀
十、文段表达。（共15分）
根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于
60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74．假设你叫李飞，是美国中学生杰克的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给杰克写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍你对他在北京的安排或者建议。
Dear Li Fei, I’m lucky to have you as my host family. I will stay in Beijing just for two days. I hope to go to your school and study with you. I’m interested in your courses and after-class activities. I also want to know more about Beijing? Could you please show me around Beijing? Would you mind telling me the two-day life and activities? I’m looking forward to your letter. Yours, Jack
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you.
____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Fei Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. It’s my honor to be with you and show you around Beijing. Now I will tell you about my plan for your two-day stay here.
On the first day, I am going to take you to my school and study with me. In the morning, you can choose 3 classes to listen to. In the afternoon, there will be different kinds of clubs after class. I am sure you will fall in love with my school.
On the second day, I plan to have a bus tour to enjoy the sights of Beijing. We will get off at Tian’an Men Square, where we can feel the perfect mixture of the past and the present. After walking on the magnificent square, we can visit the Palace Museum. Here you can see some
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wonderful buildings and learn about Chinese history better.
So, what’s your decision? I just can’t wait to meet you and you’re always welcome！
Yours,
Li Fei
朝阳
十、文段表达 (15分)（中5， 难5）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。 74. 某英文报纸的“English Study”专栏向中学生征稿，要求同学们介绍一下
自己英语学习的现状，谈谈对英语学习的感受，以及进一步提高英语水平的打算。请你投稿。
提示词语：talk about, learn English, useful, important, work hard, improve
I’m happy to talk about my English. I’ve learned English for about nine years. Now I’m good at reading and writing, but a little weak in listening and speaking.
In my opinion, English is useful and important, so we should learn it well. In fact, it’s not difficult to learn if we work hard at it in proper ways.
In order to improve my English, I’m going to watch English TV programs and listen to English songs in my free time. Besides I’ll try to speak English as much as possible. I’m sure I’ll make progress in listening and speaking in the future. 西城
十、文段表达（15分）
74. 根据中文和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。
请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
某英文报纸以 “ A Good Sentence to Me ” 为题征文，请你投稿。请你从下面的三句话中选出你最喜欢的一句，并结合自己的经历谈谈你喜欢它的理．．．．．．．．．由。
☆ The more we read, the more we will know.
☆ Helping others is one of the gifts we have to give in life. ☆ If we’re not making mistakes, then we’re not doing anything. 2
东城
十、文段表达（15分）
根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74. 假设你叫李华，是美国中学生爱丽丝的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请给
她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Hi！Li Hua, I need some advice from you. My parents want me to go to the family party this Saturday, but I want to go out with my friends. What should I do? Do you have the same problem? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice
Hi！Alice, ____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Li Hua Hi！Alice, Sometimes I have the same problem. And I think you need to communicate with your parents.
First, ask your parents for more information about the family party and decide
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which is more important for you. Second, tell your parents what you think about it. If you decide not to go to the family party, you’d better tell them that you love them and other family members very much. Last but not least, be polite when refusing the invitation. It’s always necessary to think carefully before making a decision.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours, Li Hua
丰台
十、文段表达（15分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语写一篇不少于60词的短文，要求意思连贯、符合逻辑，文章开头已给出，其词数不计入你写的短文内，所给其它英文提示词语供选用。文中请不要出现你的真实姓名或校名。
74. 假设你是学校的安全宣传员，请利用下面本地学生道路伤害事故原因统计图表，写一篇英文短文，向你校的外籍学生介绍那些事故的主要原因，提醒他们注意个人交通安全，针对这些主要原因提出几点保障出行安全的建议,最后，表达你对他们在这里安全、愉快生活和学习的良好祝愿。
Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places. _______________________________________________ Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.
For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened just
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because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly, like not using the crosswalk or listening to music while walking across.
Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re using the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully when you are crossing a road. That’s all for my story and tips. I hope they can be of some help to your safety. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here. 132 w Version 2
…For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened first because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly. Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re on the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully before you go across.
All this is good for your road safety. Do remember it anytime. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here. 112 w
石景山
十、文段表达（15分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。
74. 好的学习习惯对每个人来说都是很重要的。假设你叫李华，是美国中学
生Linda的笔友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，分享你的做法，并就此谈谈你的看法。 Hi! Li Hua, We had an interesting discussion in today’s class. It’s about learning habits. Some of my classmates think they’re important, but others disagree. Have you had this talk before? Hope you can share something with me. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours, Linda Hi! Linda, I’m glad to hear from you. I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Li Hua 5
Hi! Linda, I’m glad to hear from you. Yes. We have had the same talk before. As for me, I usually revise my lessons after I finfish my homework. And when I have some problems in my study, I will ask my teachers or classmates for help. What’s more, I often read some English newspapers to improve my reading skills.
I think good learning habits are very important. It can not only help us succeed in our study, but also help us grow up as a person. But if we can’t keep on doing something, we may not develop good learning habits.
I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Li Hua 门头沟
十、文段表达 （共15分）
74. 我们的家乡正在发生着日新月异的变化，为配合我区举办的“礼仪门头沟
(Charm Mentougou)”活动的开展，
请你以“How to behave well?”为
主题，写一篇不少于60词的英语作文参赛。
内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. „„
注意：1. 文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。
How to behave well?
房山
十、文段表达 （15分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。 所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74．目前环境变得越来越糟，我们都应该 “低碳(low carbon)”生活。现在某英文报纸就此话题征文，请你投稿。请谈谈我们应该如何做，并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语：environment, become, worse, protect, have a “low carbon” life, reuse, save, important
The environment is becoming worse and worse. We should do something to
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protect the environment. We need to have a low carbon life. First, we should go to school on foot or by bus instead of going by car. Second, we should save energy by turning off the lights, TV sets and air conditionings in time when we don’t need them. Third, don’t use plastic bags when we are shopping. Instead, take shopping basket with us. In addition, water should be reused as much as possible. Lastly, we should plant more trees to make carbon low.
I think it is very important to protect our environment. It’s our duty to have a low carbon life. Our life will become better and better if more people take actions to offer their help.
怀柔
十、文段表达。（15分）
74. 假设你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana。收到了读者Steve的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信。
要求：1. 词数：60词以上。
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文章必须包含以下提示的三方面内容，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 与人交流 be active , group work，express ideas, talk with„ 参加活动 class activities„ 表达善意 „„
Dear Diana, I just came to a new school. And I can’t get on well with my new classmates…What should I do? Steve
Dear Steve, I’ve learned about your problems. I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to talk with your classmates at break. If you want to get on well with your classmates, don’t forget to say hello when you meet them. Being friendly and helpful is also very important. You need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions. I’m sure you will soon be among friends.
Best wishes,
Diana
昌平
Dear Steve, I’ve learned about your problems. I think_________________________________ Best Wishes, Diana 十、文段表达 （15分）
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根据中英文提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
75. 还有一个多月就要中考了。为取得好成绩，老师让我们思考怎样改进学习，提高学习效率。你是怎样想的？你准备怎样改进自己的学习？
senior high school entrance exam, efficiency (效率), improve, think, find, listen, do, ask, hope
Senior high school entrance exam is coming soon. Our teacher asked us
to think how to improve our learning and get better efficiency. I think it important and necessary to do so. I have learned a lot in school. I’ll go over what I have learned and find out where my difficulties are according to my revision plan. And then I’ll ask my teacher and classmates for help. Keeping healthy and good mood will also do good. I hope I will get good scores and enter my ideal school. (88)
大兴
十、文段表达（15分）
74. 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60个词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你叫张华，美国中学生杰克是你的网友，你们约好今年暑假期间他要来你家生活、学习，你收到了他的电子邮件。请给杰克写一个回复，回答他的问题，并谈谈你自己的美好愿望。
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Hi! Zhang Hua, I’m going to fly to China and live with you during this summer holiday. I think it’s a good chance for me to learn Chinese from you. But I don’t know if I can get used to the life at your home. Though Chinese food is very delicious, it’s hard for me to cook a meal on my own. Can you give me some help? What shall we do together? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Jack
Hi! Jack, I’m glad you will spend this summer holiday with me at my home. _______________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your coming. Yours, Zhang Hua Hi! Jack,
I’m glad you will spend this summer holiday with me at my home. Don’t worry about the food. My parents will prepare each meal for us. If you don’t get used to eating our Chinese
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food, we can buy some western food in the supermarket near my home.
I also think it’s a good chance for us to learn from each other. In our free time I will take you to visit the Great Wall and other places. During the trips I can practice my spoken English with you. I’m sure you can also make great progress in Chinese.
I hope you will get used to the life here soon. So you can have a good time together with our family. Perhaps next year, I will have a chance to go to the USA and live with you.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Zhang Hua 密云
十、文段表达（15分）
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。 74. 假如你是李冰，你美国的笔友Mike遇到了一个难题，发邮件向你求助。请
回封邮件，写出个人看法，并提出解决问题的建议。
注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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Dear Li Bing, I'm so sad.This morning on my way home I saw an old man lying on the ground.He was badly hurt.I quickly took him to the hospital.But his daughter thought it was me hurt his father and she said many dirty words and was very angry with me ...I don't know whether I will help others in the future? Can you help me? Yours, Mike Dear Mike,
I have received your e-mail recently. I can understand you.
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_________________________________________________________________ I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours, Li Bing
Dear Mike,
I have received your e-mail recently. I can understand you.I think you are right.I hope you can get ready to help others as possible as you can.
I can give you some advice. First when you meet such things,you'd better call110 to ask the policeman for help.Besides you should try to explain to his daughter,I think maybe she didn't know the reason and just was too worried. What's more, don't think more about that, I think you did right,sooner or later she will understand you and thank you.
I hope you can go on helping people in trouble.I'm sure if everyone can give a hand to others,the world will become more and more beautiful.
I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours, Li Bing
通州
十、文段表达（共12分）
66. 假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友Tom的一封信，请你给他写一封回信。在信中回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on
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English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What should I do?
Yours, Tom
I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right. She wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you. It’s good for your study. I think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve your English. Your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. As a student, we should work hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers.
延庆
十、文段表达。（共15分）
74. 学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你是Li Hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词：Li Hua，student, Class Four, Grade Three , the Old People’s Home, sing, dance,
In the lake of my memories, there is a photo which always shines like a pearl. It’s a gift from my former teachers and classmates in Shanghai – the best one I’ve ever got.
Before I came to Beijing, they gave me this photo. I was shocked that the photo was taken a year ago during our spring outing. All my teachers and classmates were in the photo. At the back of the picture, there are 48 signatures and best wishes from them. I read them one by one. I didn’t realize that my tears were running down my cheeks until my friends hugged me.
I love this special present so much because it shows me the wonderful time which I spent with my dear classmates and teachers. Besides, it is their wishes that fill my heart with love and warmth all the time. I’ll always treasure it as the most valuable pearl in the world. (155 words) 平谷
十、文段表达 (15分)
根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60
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词的回文。回文的开头和结尾已经给出。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
74．假设你叫刘京，你在回复Helen的博文。请你回答她的问题，针
对她的问题谈谈你的看法，给她提几点建议。 My problem is my parents. All of my classmates have mobile phones. They phone each other easily, surf the Internet and play games. I’m always asking my parents for it. But they refuse again and again. None of my friends have got such terrible parents. For it, I can’t study hard. Do you think I’m right? What shall I do? Helen, USA Hi! Helen, If you have more questions, please ask me． Yours, Jing Hi! Helen, I don’t think you’re right（表明观点）.（陈述理由） Students should pay attention to study. Mobile phones are not necessary for us. They’re not like books and pens. You should understand your parents and do what they ask.
Now public phones can be found everywhere. If you have to make a phone call, you may use them. You’d better have a talk with them and tell them you don’t ask them for it any longer. Work hard on your lessons and read more interesting books. You may also tell your problem to your teachers and friends. I’m sure they’ll help you.
If you have more questions, please ask me．
Yours, Jing
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顺义
十、文段表达。（共15分）
2012年5月8日晚，一张高三男生教室内集体半裸苦读照片迅速在微博上爆红。画面中18名男子留着短发，穿着短裤，全部赤膊上阵。更有意思的是，明亮的夜灯，留着白色粉笔字的黑板，看起来崭新的桌椅标着“五中 305”。那些半裸男学生个个集中精力，持笔埋头在书本中„„
74. 请根据图片和文字提示写一篇短文，谈谈自己的感受，分析一下他们刻苦学习的理由，再结合自己的实际生活谈谈今后的打算。 燕山
十、文段表达。(共15分)
根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。
74. 假设你叫李冰，是Tina的好友。今天，你收到了Tina的来信。请根据来信内容写一封回信，
针对她的烦恼谈谈你的看法，鼓励她努力学习，并提些好的建议。
Hello! Li Bing, You know, I’m in Grade 9 this term. We have just finished the Physical Test and I’m happy to tell you I’ve got full marks. But now, we have more homework every day. When I finish my homework, it’s too late. As a result, I have no time to do the things I like, such as playing ball games, watching TV and surfing the Internet. I think I can learn well by listening to teachers in class. So I don’t think doing homework is so necessary. I’m so tired and feel bored. What should I do? Yours Tina 14
Hello! Tina,
Nice to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours, Li Bing
Hello! Tina,
Nice to hear from you. I’m glad that you’ve got full marks in the Physical Test. Now the final exams are coming. Most students have the same problem as yours, so I can understand you.
I think doing homework is necessary and useful. Listening to teachers carefully in class is only the first step. By doing homework, we can review what we have learned in class. So if you want to do the things you like, try to make full use of your time. It’s also a good idea to talk about your problem with your teachers. I’m sure they will help you. Work hard and you will enjoy your life.
Yours, Li Bing
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