（30）短文改错一
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改, 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I learned the meaning of been trusted when I was in junior school. At that time, I was the very shy girl and no one ever take notice of me. One day, we were asked for to recite a text. Mr. Liu, our English teacher, saying that only after we recited it him could we go home. My classmate left the classroom one after another. At last, I gathered the courage to stand in front of him. Before I started, he said in a low and clear voice, “I trust you.\" You can't imagine that much his words meant to me. Thanks to Mr. Liu, I am confidently in both life and study now.
2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Lost time can never be find again. This is something that I learned very clearly at last term.I spent so many time hanging around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something has to be done. It was time for a change.
Now I have a new plan for using our time wisely. I have set my alarm clock half an hour early. This will give me early start on the day. I have also decided to keep a note of all the thing I have to do. Look back on what I've done will give me some ideas on what to arrange my time.
3、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线\\划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, I was standing near a subway exit, tried to call a taxi. But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxithrough my cell phone. Soon it came, and I stepped in, feeling pretty proudly of my high tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app. So later, I was upset to find that the driver was busy looking his cell phone to get the next order. It was just then when I began to worry about my safety. What’s bad, the driver’s informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi booking app the next time.
4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it.
5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’ve learned from the newspaper my company is looking for a clerk. I’m very interesting in the job and I’d like to apply for at the position.
First of all, allow me introduce myself. I have just graduated from senior high school and take the College Entrance Examination. I want to find an part - time job in the summer. I’m 18 years old and have a good knowledge of English. In fact, I won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school last year. Beside, I’m quite easy - going and therefore very popular among my classmate.
I sincere hope you can give me a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 The other day ,I was on my way back home from school while I found a lime boy crying on the road .I stopped and asked him what is the matter ,and he told me he couldn't find his mom .Luckily ,he remembered his mother's telephone number .So I called him immediately .Ten minute later ,the boy saw his mom and became exciting .His mom was so much thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift ,and I refused .At that time ,I felt quite happily because I did something really good.
To my opinion, the world needs love and we should be willing to help others without expecting any repay .If we wanted repay, as matter of fact, a “thank-you” is enough.
7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically.and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
China is a populous country, with the worlds largest populations. While it is also rich in water resources, its fresh water per person accounts of only a quarter of the world’s per capita(人均). Better still,water resources are unevenly distributed in China, for most fresh water concentrate in its south whereas there is only 1/4 as much in the north. Beside water scarcity in China, there is another serious problem: water pollution. Over the past decades, more than 80% of surface and ground water has polluted as a result of uncontrol discharge of industrial wastes. The consequence is that over half of the six hundred cities throughout the county are short of water supply, of that one hundred and eight are already very thirsty. For this reason, we must heighten our aware of water protection and make greater efforts to protect the environment, or else the last drop of the water on earth would be our teardrop.
答案以及解析
1答案及解析：
答案： I learned the meaning of was
been trusted when I was in junior school. At that time, I beingthetake very shy girl and no one ever notice of me. One day, we were asked for to recite atooksaying that only after we recited it to him could we go saida text. Mr. Liu, our English teacher, home. My
classmate left the classroom one after another. At last, I gathered the courage to
classmatesand clear voice, “I trust you.\" You can’t butconfidentlythatimagine much his words meant to me. Thanks to Mr. Liu, I am in both life
confidenthowstand in front of him. Before I started, he said in a low
and study now.
解析：1. 第一句中的been改为being考査非谓语动词,前面是介词of, 后面使用being。 2. 第二句中的the改为a考査冠词。此处指我是一个害羞的女孩,泛指一个。
3.第二句中的take改为took考査时态。前面有At that time那时,描述的是过去的事情。 4. 第三句中的for删除考査动词:be asked to do sth.被要求做某事。误解分析:ask for sth.要某物
5. 第四句中的saying改为said 考查谓语动词及时态此处缺少谓语动词,主语是Mr. Liu, 句子为一般过去时态。
6.第四句中的it后面加to考査介词recite sth. to sb.
7. 第五句中的classmate改为classmates 考查名词。根据后面的one after another,可知这里指作者的很多同学,应使用复数形式
8. 第七句中的and改为but 考查连词。此处表示低沉但是清晰的声音,表示转折的意义。 9. 第八句中的that改为how考查宾语从句。根据后面的much可知,how much引导宾语从句。 10. 第九句中的confidently改为confident考查形容词“be confident in\" 在......有信心。
2答案及解析：
答案： Lost time can never be last term.I spent so that something
again. This is something that I learned very clearly at
time hanging around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized to be done. It was time for a change.
Now I have a new plan for using time wisely. I have set my alarm clock half an hour
. This will give me early start on the day. I have also decided to keep a note of all
the I have to do. to arrange my time.
back on what I've done will give me some ideas on
解析：
1. 第一句中的find改为found考查被动语态。 time和find之间为被动关系,故将find改为found。
2. 第二句中的at删除考査固定用法。last term这类有next, last, this或者that的短语前面不再使用介词。
3. 第三句中的 many改为much考查限定词。time是不可数名同, 故使用much。 4. 第四句中的has改为had考查时态。前面是realized,从句的时态保持一致。 5. 第六句中的our改为my考査代词。主语是I,因此表示“我的时间”应使用。 6. 第七句中的early改为earlier 考查副词比较级把闹钟调快半个小时,有比较的含义。 7. 第八句中的me后面加an考査冠词。early是一个以元音音素开头的单词,start在这里是名词。
8. 第九句中的thing改为things考查名词。前面有all,故使用名词复数。 9.第十句中的Look改为Looking考查非谓语动词。此处用动名词形式作主语。
10.第十句中的第二个what改为how考查“疑问词+不定式”结构。表示怎样安排时间,强调方式,使用how。
3答案及解析：
答案： Last Friday, I was standing near a subway exit,
tried to call a taxi. But no luck.Then
tryingI thought of the taxi booking app my friend
has recommended and I booked a taxithrough my hadcell phone. Soon it came, and I stepped in, feeling pretty
proudly of my high tech way and
proudSo later, I was upset to find that the
But/Yetwhen
driver was busy looking at his cell phone to get the next order. It was just then I began
that
satisfied with the convenience brought by the app.
to worry about my safety. What’s
informationsbad, the driver’s might be unreliable.
informationworseprotecting if something bad happens? So be careful
protectedHow can we passengers' legal rights be
when you use the taxi booking app the next time. 解析：
1. 第一句中的tried改为trying考查非谓语动词。现在分词短语作伴随状语。
2. 第三句中的has为had考査时态。此处表示的动作发生在前面的thought of之前,表示过去的过去用过去完成时。
3. 第四句中的proudly改为proud考査形容词。前面的feeling的原形是系动词,故后面跟形容词作表语。
4. 第五句中的So为But或者Yet考查连词。这里是转折的意思,不是因果关系。
5. 第五句中的looking后面加at考查介词。look at his cellphone 看他的手机,look at看,为固定词组。
6. 第六句中的when改为that 考査强调句型。此处是It was... that...句型,强调then。误解分析:学生们容易看成when引导时间状语从句,而忽略了全句的结构。
7. 第七句中的bad改为worse 考査固定结构。what is worse更糟糕的是,为固定结构。 8. 第七句中的 informations 改为information 考査名词。information 是一个不可数名词,没有复数形式。
9. 第八句中的proterting改为protected考査语态。句意:如果坏事发生,我们乘客的合法权利如何能得到保护?根据句意.此处用过去分词形式。
10. 第九句中的next前面的the删除考査固定用法。next time 下次。
4答案及解析：
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I
think I would be happy there. Now I am
thoughtor the mountains andliving in a city ,but I miss my home in thecountryside. There the air is clean are green. Unfortunately,
on the development of industrialization, the environment has been withpolluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very Muchseriouslyairsproblem. The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are
Manyseriousairdying out . We must to regret it.
解析高中即将毕业了,有一些体会和同学们分享。1.感谢老师,家长和朋友们;2.致歉于我曾经误会伤害的人;3.祝福同学们心想事成。
foundyour ways to protect environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live findour
1. think→thought句意:我认为在在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时,表示“过去认为”。
2. countryside前加the 句意:但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指,故用定冠词the。 3. or→and句意:那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系,故用连词and。 4. on→with句意:随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着……的发展。
5. been去掉句意:许多研究表明。主语与动词为主动关系,这里不需要用被动语态。 6. seriously→serious句意:全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词,前面用形容词修饰。
7. airs→air 句意:我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。名词air为不可数名词。 8. much→many句意:许多罕见的动物已经消失。名词animal为可数名词,故用many修饰。 9. found→find句意:我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。动词用法错误。情态动词must后接动词原形。
10. your→our句意:我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。 考点:短文改错。
5答案及解析：
答案： I’ve learned from the newspaper
my company is looking for a clerk. I’m very yourinteresting in the job and I’d like to apply for at the position. interested First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I have just graduated from senior high school and
takean the College Entrance Examination. I want to find part - time job in the summer. I’m takena18 years old and have a good knowledge of English. In fact, I won the first prize in the English
holdBeside in our school last year. , I’m quite easy - going and heldBesidesclassmatetherefore very popular among my .
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6答案及解析：
答案： The other day ,I was on my way back home from school crying on the road .I stopped and asked him what
sincere hope you can give me a chance. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
sincerelywhile I found a lime boy whenis the matter ,and he told me he couldn't was
find his mom .Luckily ,he remembered his mother's telephone number .So I called immediately .Ten
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minutesexcitedandso much thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift , I refused .At that time ,I felt
butquite
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1. when考查连词。句意:我正走在放学回家的路上这时候发现一名小男孩在路边哭。was/were doing sth.---when--,正在做某事,这时候---,故把while→when。
2. was考查时态。句意:我停下来,问他怎么了。句子用一般过去时态,故把is→was 。 3. her考查人称代词。句意:我立刻给他妈妈打电话。故把called后的him→her。 4. minutes考查名词。句意:十分钟之后,可知名词用复数形式,答案为minute→minutes。75. excited考查形容词。句意:男孩见到他的妈妈感到很兴奋。修饰人,表示“感到...”用带ed的形容词。故把exciting→excited。
6. mu\\ch考查副词。句意:他的妈妈很感激,想送给我礼物。much不能修饰形容词,故把so后的much去掉。
7. but考查连词。句意:她想给我买一个小礼物,但是我拒绝了。故把I refused前的and→but。 8. happy考查形容词。句意:我感到非常高兴。形容词作表语,故把 happily→happy。 9. In考查固定搭配。句意:依我之见,这个世界需要爱,我们都应不计回报的帮助别人。固定搭配:in one's opinion以某人看来,故把 To→In。注意大写开头。
10. a考查固定短语。句意:如果想要回报,一句“谢谢”就足够了。固定词组:as a matter of fact 事实上,故在matter前加a。
【点评】通读全文并翻译,找出时态、连接词和人称代词的错误,然后再逐句找错,从名词单复数、冠词。非谓语动词、从句、固定词组等方面考虑错误。最后再核查答案。
7答案及解析：
答案： When I look at this picture of myself. I realize
how fast time flies. I
had grown haveand also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo buttookbecomewas , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school
takenbecamenot only physically.
music club. Around me in the/this picture are the things
they were very important
that/whichin my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying
differencelate kings of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the
differentlatestyour high school mymusic albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of days. 解析：
1. realize是及物动词,其后直接跟宾语,去掉of。 2. in the past few years是现在完成时的标志性短语。
3. not only ..but also 固定短语。“不但...而且...”,为固定结构。
4. photo和take之间是被动关系,应用被动语态。所以be动词后应用过去分词。 5. and连接两个并列的成分,形式应保持一致,由entered可知,此处也用一般过去时。 6. 此处特指前句中的this photo,所以在picture前加the或this。
7. 这里是定语从句,先行词是the things,引导词在定语从句中作主语,故应用that或which引导从句。
8.修饰名词kinds应用形容词形式。
9. 意思是最新的,此处应用形容词的最高级形式,用latest。 10. 文章是以第一人称写的,因此此处指“我的”,故用my。
8答案及解析：
答案： China is a populous country, with the worlds largest
populations. While it is also rich
populationin water resources, its fresh water per person accounts
of only a quarter of the world’s per forBetter still,water resources are unevenly distributed in China, for most fresh
WorseBesideconcentratewater in its south whereas there is only 1/4 as much in the north. water
concentratesBesidescapita(人均).
scarcity in China, there is another serious problem: water pollution. Over the past decades, more than 80% of surface and ground water has been polluted as a result of
uncontrol discharge
uncontrolledof industrial wastes. The consequence is that over half of the six hundred cities throughout the
that one hundred and eight are already very thirsty. For
whichaware this reason, we must heighten our of water protection and make greater efforts to
awarenesscounty are short of water supply, of
protect the environment, or else the last drop of the water on earth would be our teardrop. 解析：
① 考査名词的数.population(人口)是不可数名词,没有复数形式。 ②考査动词短语。account for是间定短语,意为“(数量、比例上)占”。
③ 考査固定用法。根据句意可知,此处应使用Worse still(更糟糕的是) 来表示上下文之间的递进关系。
④ 考査主谓一致。主语fresh water为不可数名词,故谓语动词应改为第三人称单数形式。 ⑤ 考査介词。besides作介词,意为“除……之外(还)”,符合语境。
⑥ 考査动词的语态。主语water与pollute在逻辑上是被动关系.且此处为现在完成时,故应使用其被动语态has been polluted。
⑦ 考査形容试。形容词修饰名词,此处uncontrolled discharge ofindustrial wastes指“工业废水不受控制的排放” uncontrolled不受控制的。
⑧ 考査定语从句。“介同+关系代词”引导定语从句时,指物用of + which;指人用 of + whom。 ⑨ 考查名词。aware是形容词,此处应改为其名词形式awareness作动词 heighten的宾语。 ⑩考査冠词。the last drop of water指“最后一滴水”,water是不可数名词,表示泛指意义时其前不加冠词
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